Week 11. Self evaluation (finish making a strategy)

Self evaluation & Strategy

• First, I think I need more supporting details. Especially, I think I should research more about Sigmund Freud's theory because it is the base of my argument. Also, I need to paraphrase it more easily in order to increase reader's understanding.

• Second, I think I should research other scientists' opinions which are opposite to my thesis. And I'll reinforce my argument through reputing them logically.

• Third, I'll search more examples that adapt my argument. They would be examples in which we can find in our daily lives easily.Then,I'll establish more valid conclusion.

1) My introduction is interesting and attractive.

2) My narration needs to be easier. I had better paraphrase some terms and explain the situation more obviously.

3) My confirmation is logical but readers may have trouble in understanding the theory. Therefore, I'll research more about theory and explain it easily. Also I had better mention other examples more.

4) My reputation seems a little bit abstract. Hence, I'll try to find other scientists' opinions which are opposite to my thesis and repute it clearly.

5) My conclusion is fine but if more exact example is added, it would become more credible.